[Payback] Need more love for this masterpiece
Got this recommendation from a “slow burn smut” thread and, wow. It’s perfect
The story is complex and incredibly well paced, even though I usually except smut early I was perfectly fine waiting for it here (though the MCs do still do things eaely on, no official fking until like chapter 80 lol)
It just constantly had me on the edge of my seat and wanting more. I think sure it has its cliches (mysterious powerful man who just knows everything and treats the mc like a small fry in the grand scheme of things) but idc because it works and makes their dynamic fun
Spoilers on the ending now
I really wish we got to see Yoohan show verbal affection towards Jay and “comfort” him a little. I wish we saw a conversation about the bodyguards knees so that Jay knew that Yoohan understands why he’s important to Jay
There’s just so much closure I wish we got in the main story thst I guess will come up in the sides (I hope?!?)
Jay may be a psycho black flag but in the world of fiction even he’s just another person that was hurt and wants affection so I wish we got a tiny smidge of that verbal reassurance from Yoohan that he seeks
Got this recommendation from a “slow burn smut” thread and, wow. It’s perfect
The story is complex and incredibly well paced, even though I usually except smut early I was perfectly fine waiting for it here (though the MCs do still do things eaely on, no official fking until like chapter 80 lol)
It just constantly had me on the edge of my seat and wanting more. I think sure it has its cliches (mysterious powerful man who just knows everything and treats the mc like a small fry in the grand scheme of things) but idc because it works and makes their dynamic fun
Spoilers on the ending now
I really wish we got to see Yoohan show verbal affection towards Jay and “comfort” him a little. I wish we saw a conversation about the bodyguards knees so that Jay knew that Yoohan understands why he’s important to Jay
There’s just so much closure I wish we got in the main story thst I guess will come up in the sides (I hope?!?)
Jay may be a psycho black flag but in the world of fiction even he’s just another person that was hurt and wants affection so I wish we got a tiny smidge of that verbal reassurance from Yoohan that he seeks